In this third chapter we have a nice story but not as nice as that of the second chapter. I liked the protagonists even if I did not find the story very original and in some places there were passages a little too fast. I would have liked to see more of their relationship but I appreciate how there has been a development of the characters.
Overall all three chapters were interesting but they certainly understood from the mistakes of the first and improved. Surely the second story is the one written better while the first is the one written worse.
Overall all three chapters were interesting but they certainly understood from the mistakes of the first and improved. Surely the second story is the one written better while the first is the one written worse.
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